Friday, October 22, 2004

Night Light

Stayed up reading until about three a.m. and then put in another hour this morning.

Overall, it's surprisingly smooth.

The rough patches are at the end. I just need to block out the plot points, clear and simple so that the emotional tug-of-war is easier to follow.

I'm going to go look at it again, then maybe take the weekend to let it cool off.