Skimmed through twice more, mostly notably cutting the scapbook references. They're sweet/scary but seem a bit out of character for Q and, besides, there's zero mention of it between page 11 and page 201, which generally doesn't make for a compelling prop.
I'm wondering today if I need some attribution here and there for some of the narration. Maybe not. Maybe. Hm.
AB offered to read again, which was hugely generous, so I'm going to key in changes one more time and drop it off over at her place later this afternoon. No movies. Just me, the desktop, and whatever cat happens in (currently Mercury).
There aren't even enough changes right now to justify a whole new reprint but rather a page here or a few pages there. Saving trees and all.
I'll drop it off later this afternoon and can only hope she likes it.
