What is the name of that clock tower (not the clock tower, but that clock tower) by Town Lake anyway, and when does it chime, and should I make mention of it in the scene at the trail? Especially if no one, even locals, recognize it.
Can you hear the bands outside after midnight on Thursday on South Congress? What if you're across the street? Or is there already enough flavor of the music scene?
In December, I need to do a read aloud, perhaps up the beats. Terse is good at times, flow better at others.
