Saturday, November 13, 2004

Spit Polish

Spent some time on the two new D/Q scenes--mostly working on little details like making sure the reader (at least in rhetrospect) understands how he's trying to manipulate and establishing their pre R dynamic. More minorly, changed what Q has for breakfast to something more local. Sometimes the difference between good and better is putting in more thought on the storytelling details.

Also finished To Catch A Wolf by Susan Krinard (particularly affecting heroine), which maxes me out on the romance gothics. I don't think there's that much else available. Moving on to the mystery gothics.